Acoustic Sensitivity

Wow, your poem has good imagery. You really depicted the scene where a writer first starts out with a blank page then ends it with a creation. I especially love ...

It was very good but there's only thing I didn't like and that is the playwright part. Well I know it would be a bit funny in a play if ...

Gesundheit anyone? :lol: Wow you have a kind of anarchic thinking based on this story. Are you somehow a revolutionist? Cleansing. Cleanse the world! Cleanse Germany! Let the muck and ...

It's kind of hard to critic lyrics that is 4 lines short but since you said that this is the chorus then I guess it's fine. One suggestion, when you're ...

It was a nice poem. It conveyed your emotion. Yeah, it sounds emo and I like it (laughs). But it's like a typical poem. Nothing really spectacular. Also there are ...

It's a nice song. It's like a song from an anime like Naruto. This would sound good in a band. Bridge 1: I don't know what you've been told Let ...

Yeah, mate it was good. It's a bit sad but still it was fine. But I think this song is a "Row Your Boat" type of song. It's flow is ...

It showed good imagery and emotion. Hold me now. Tell my that my nightmares Are nothing more Then paranoia. Shouldn't it be, "Tell me that my nightmares are nothing more ...

It was funny. I have 2 suggestions though. And you burst into big tears I agree with Cade. You should change that line because it's a bit awkward if you ...

It good imagery and message. Though, I think this is a song. It's structure doesn't flow much. What is this life worth When all you ever get is pain There ...

It was nice and very emotional. It also show good imagery. One question though, is this really a song? I think it's more of a poem than a song because ...

Wow, an absolute thriller. It reminds me of Die Hard and the movie of Sandra Bullock and Keannu Reeves called, Speed. At first, it starts like another teen movie but ...

Wow that's a cliffhanger. I want to find out what's next. It's a great chapter especially the last part where the boy found his name engraved in a stone. What ...

Hush little baby, no need to fear. Time to go to sleep while mama-dear is here. Hush little baby, no need to cry Mama-dear is here and always ‘til you… ...

Enter months and, enter the years The glowing cheeks that I came to fear Your heavy collapse My heavy relapse The empty bottles, the empty bottles Sirens on the meadow, ...